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Smoking should be banned in all public places

A smoker's poor choice should not affect the health of others. Secondhand smoke contains hundreds of toxic chemicals including arsenic ammonia, hydrogen eyanide, formal dehyde, benzene and vinyl chloride. It is known to cause cancer, coronary heart diseases, and respiratory problems. There is no risk free level of exposure to secondhand smoke. Therefore, smoking should be banned in all public places because it can make passive smokers get suffered from many diseases.
Non smokers should not be subjected to this disgusting habit. Willing to ban smoking in public places is not about taking away a smoker's rights. They will still have the rights to smoke in their own space. The right to slowly and deliberately harm others was never theirs to begin with.
Smoking is usual in public places because most people especially "Man" always smokes in everywhere and everytime. However, smokes must be banned because it can affect others and it can also cause someone else or passive smokers suffer.

6 komentar:

Candra mengatakan...

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Fariza Elstang mengatakan...

oke,,thanks...atas comentnya

anggungnastiti mengatakan...

Fariza, in 7th line and 3rd sentence (1st paragraph),why don't you use the word 'they are' to replace the word 'it is'?
I think, it's better to use that word because that's related to the sentence before. You have explained that the smoke of the cigarette contains hundreds of chemicals toxics such as, bla-bla-bla..
After that, you wrote 'it is known to cause cancer....’. I think the word 'it' is uncorrect because it refers to 'hundreds of chemicals toxics,...etc’ and i think,that words showed the plural..

Like this!! Basicly your essay's good.. Hoping my comment can make your essays will be better..
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Fariza Elstang mengatakan...

ok anggung,,
i just wanna say that 'they are' is more properly than 'it is',,because it's showed to all,,

-thanks before-
faithfully,

Me

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Fariza Elstang mengatakan...

iyup.. alright ^^